My first camping trip !
When I was in second-grade in junior high school, I had a camping trip held for all students by the school. It's my first camping experience. Everything became unexpected and amazing because I had never met. No doubt how excited I was.
We spent couples of hours to Zou-Ma-Lai Farm, a wide and extensive campsite. Trees and grassland came into my eyes. It was filled with natural things, but there still were many facilities for our activities. We enjoyed games on the grass and in the woods, took a walk with beautiful sunset along the path through the woods, had a campfire party with a splendid campfire under a steel canopy. It's really a happy day. After all recreations, it's time for sleep.At the same time, we all were too tired to put up our tents. But what we had in our eyes was that the whole tents had been set in place. What a wonderful surprise! Then we took a cold shower because of the lack of hot water. Thus we were just woken up like that. Presumably we didn't want to fall asleep yet. So we had a walk at night. Unfortunately I had no space for sleep when I came back to my tent. It's overcrowded with my roommates.They were big guys. Such a poor man like me could only sleep beside the door of the tent. Afterword one day passed by.
Many things happened during the camping, whatever it was happy and funny, or poor and embarrssing, it was unexpected and amazing. This is my first and only camping trip,I like it.


2 Comments:
Well done(Again)!
Everything became unexpected and amazing because I had never met.
-->I had never met (Can you think of other better words to express the idea?)
-->unexpected and amazing (a bit awkward and confusing when these two words are put together: unexpected--negative? amazing-->positive) Maybe you can give a clearer explanation here?
-->think of a better thesis statement that can both give your readers a hint and interest them.
Don't forget to post the new assignment--illustration and
exemplification.
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