The second assignment!
I live in Tainan and serve in the army as a captain instructor.My lessons include aircraft ground service,instructions of technical manual,ground support equipment,etc.I have been in the military for 7 years,it's still a long way for my life.
Two months ago,I took the two-year college entrance exam,and then I was distributed to Nan Tai Technical University.In the age of high school,I always got good achivements in English.It made me become interested in English,and encouraged me to keep learning,to improve my skills whether it is listening,speaking,reading or writing.That's also why I am here.
When I was a student during high school,I used to take exercises,for example,baseball,baseketball,volleyball and kickboxing.Even though it would make me sweat,especially in summer,I had never quit because it is the best way to be strong and healthy.
posted by A-BOO @ 9:06 PM
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Well done!
1.I live in Tainan and service in the army as a captain instructor.
-->serve
2.it's still a long way for my live
-->life
3.I finished my exams for two-yeared college boards
-->I took he two-year college entrance exam
4. to improve my skills whatever in listening,speaking,reading and writing.
-->whether it is listening, spealing, reading, or writing.
5. Taht's also why I am here.
-->spelling
6.as for baseball,baseketball,volleyball and kickboxing.
-->for example, ...
7.Even though it would make me sweat especially in summer,I had never quit,because it is the best way to be strong and healthy.
->, especially in summer, I had never quit because ...
Taht's also why I am here.
When I was a student during high school,I used to take exercises,as for baseball,baseketball,volleyball and kickboxing.Even though it would make me sweat especially in summer,I had never quit,because it is the best way to be strong and healthy.
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