The advantage of photographing!
Photographing is an amazing method for keeping lots of things in my life,for example,happiness,sadness,anger,etc.How do I take photographs?With a digital camera.It's really a useful machine.It's convenient for picturing anything in front of you and browsing right away.The whole pictures would be stored in the memory card and transmited to computer.Thus I can share photos with friends and family in computer and web.By the way,we still can use a computer to revise or adjust photographs for better,specific or funny effects.But the main point for me is that it can catch a very moment of unforgettable things like a expression on someone's facial expression and the scenery.All photos represent my experiences in my life.They are the outlet of my emotions and feelings.How amazing it is!
posted by A-BOO @ 8:29 PM
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Which one is the topic sentence of your paragraph?
Photographing,an amazing method for keeping lots of things in my life.For example,happiness,sadness,anger,etc.
-->Photographing is an ...., for example, ...
How do I make a photographing?By a digital camera.It's really a useful machine.
-->How do I take photographs? With a ...
It's convenient for picturing anything front of you and browsing right away.
-->in front of you...
By the way,we still can use a computer to revise or adjust photographs to be better,specific or funny.
-->for better, specific, or funny effects.
But the main point for me is that it can catch a very moment of unforgettable things like a expression on someone's face or action,as well as the scenery.
-->...someone's facial expression and the scenery.
All photos are my experiences in my life.How amazing it is!
-->All photos represent my...
They just make my emotions exist.
--> They are the outlet of my emotions and feelings.
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